Saturday, January 29, 2011

Love Should Be Fair*

(This is another poem I really enjoyed from another friend)

Does the thought of my voice, my smile
Make your heart stop beating awhile
Do the memories, the touch of my lips 
Bring tears to your eyes, is it hard to get a grip
I hope so, it’s only fair
And for every promise you have broken
I hope someone breaks theirs to you
Not so you can suffer
But because that’s how I suffered
I hope so, it’s only fair
If you loved me like you said
My name shouldn’t be out of your head
And if what you proclaimed is true
You should cry every night as I do
I hope so, it’s only fair
You should lay awake at night
Because you’re still not alright
Your heart should be hard to repair
It's only fair

(Orignal: Melissa Danielson/ Revised-edited: Mr. H)

1 comment:

  1. Interesting revision haha. glad you enjoyed my poem

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